Trinity Arts Writers Workshop
Our main objective is to provide an atmosphere which fosters creativity and improvement with an emphasis on constructive, supportive critique.
Critique is given on the quality of writing, not content. Our strength is in mutual support through reading and critique.
Members sign in upon arrival if they want to read. The order is normally 'first come, first served'.
Provide enough printed copies of the work you will read. Please use the commonly accepted manuscript format . Line numbers are strongly recommended.
Pace yourself - If you read too fast, reviewers will not have time to record edits and comments.
more tips on reading
At normal reading speed, about 6 to 8 pages is the limit to read in 15 minutes. Allow time for valuable verbal comments.
Don't defend. Listen, smile, nod and take notes, then move on to the next critiquer. If necessary, discuss it later.
Critique the quality of writing, not content.
Show don't Tell.
Avoid clichés, author intrusion, and passive voice
Dealing with multiple view points (head hopping)
Setting description
Is the character believable?
Grammar, word choice
Be honest, but not mean
Temper critical remarks with positive comments,
Encourage improvement with praise and approval.
Never ridicule or make jokes at the writer's expense
State comments in the perspective of your feelings rather than the writer's faults. ex. "I feel that ABC would make the point stronger" vs "You should have done XYZ"